Black Poetry : Confusion

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  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to meet you right now
    Where you are in this moment
    But how can I meet you?
    When I've already met you
    ....Confusuion
    Tormented by past failures
    I am not willing to let you in
    Sheer determination
    Objection
    To where I started
    Square one
    Not an option
    ...Just confusion
    Deprivition of that which holds my attraction
    I can do bad by myself
    Yet somehow I don't
    I question
    How is that reality?
    When the one thing I still crave
    Is you
    Is it reality or just
    ....Confusion
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it can mix between both that leads to confusion in reality
    tyte drop
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you nailed that one

    I like that you went there

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    Confusion that steers the mind
    From the willingness of new beginnings
    Because of past-Like this piece poet
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, Patrice and Tantrum commenting. Been out of action for a while, but its always good to be back home.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If we're not willing to let someone in, they'll never truly know us, and we'll never truly know them...Just one big confusion. Still enjoying your style poet, where have you been? Welcome back sis. :)
     
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    sho happy u back in da mix .......much love
     
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    Hey Watz , just been taking time trying to work on myself. Its good hearing from you, thanks for commenting
     
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