Black Poetry : Confusion

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  1. mahoganyqueen

    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confusion

    The confusion in my mind
    Has everything and nothing to do with you
    The glitter in my eyes is not caused
    From the shard of glass
    That was once lodged in my heart
    The feelings that flow through my body
    Are unfamiliar and foreign
    Sometimes they are benign
    At other times unbelievably malignant
    For hours I sit and wonder about the change inside me
    I shrink myself and try to fly into my own body
    So I can take a look at my heart
    But nothing works
    Nothing reveals to me the truth
    But there is one thought
    Nestled in my mind
    Is this change,
    Which is like riding a Merry go round for too long
    Caused by you?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel u here sista i've test the waters of merry go rounds
    speak on
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Grab the brass ring honey, and move on!

    I thoroughly enjoyed "CONFUSION"


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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing...enjoyed this
     
  5. mahoganyqueen

    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you poets for appreciating my flow. :grouphug:
     
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