Black Poetry : CONFUSING MAZE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 20, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CONFUSING MAZE

    Rap sure and divine online my rhyme mature like wine this
    Stuff is pure iodine healing sores, revealing whores with a kiss
    Twist arms and piss on alarms kick down doors plus come brisk
    With nouns and metaphors some cats flow bold then grow old
    And try throw gold in the bank before retirement owe their soul
    To success, go to a loud town even proud clowns crowd around
    Lyrics were cloud bound rhymes reaching height in flight from ground
    Like a jet plane wet flames trailed burning JP4, fight for my crown
    A planner of devastation rap commander step to a nation and
    Slander reputations like the Watergate scandal celebations at hand
    Make knives dull when stuck through jive skulls chop off head
    Like the Highlander, the lightening is frightening it arrive real red
    Raise my knife and absorb the power now I can blast stronger
    And last longer like McCloud, feel emotions and reveal oceans hunger
    Strikes so I steal potions of food such as candy bars and Oscar Meyers
    This dim act has an impact on my taste buds wanna waste scrubs with fiers
    On the block got herds of thugs like flocks of birds trying wing true
    And cling to cash hustle with muscle try steal ATM machines no clue
    About life, unique creater take a seat in the theater watch the GHOSTRIDER
    Starring Nicholas Cage that movie is sick plus rage try make my post tighter
    Smell something burning my face on fire oh **** call the fire truck
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHHHHHAAAT!

    Ey, ey, ey. That was a triiip. Seriously, you done did it again.

    Everytime you share a rhyme I just turn of all the music and start recitin that stuff. This is nice, Rhymebad.

    The way you structure it is just tight. I lost all ability to properly articulate my sentiments. Looking forward to the next one.

    Hats off to you, Brother.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U know how a maze turn it's always confusing
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggen that.. You got skillz!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKKS FOR THE PROPS MUST CONTINUE TO DROP THIS FOR REAL YALL
     
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