Black Poetry : Confused

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlaqButterfly, Jul 11, 2002.

  1. BlaqButterfly

    BlaqButterfly Member MEMBER

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    Wassup, everybody. This is my first post. You guys are going to be the first people I've ever let read my poetry, so please be nice.
    Thanks.

    Have you ever been confused
    Sitting around all mixed up
    You wanna be more than friends
    But relationships get tough
    Have you ever been confused
    About someone that's just a friend
    Daydreaming about romance
    While you're chillin at their crib
    Have you ever been confused
    Not sure what to do
    Cause if they aren't feeling you like that
    Your friendship will be through
    Have you ever been confused
    Thinking maybe this will pass
    Wondering if your feelings
    Like the summer heat
    Are something that won't last
    Have you ever been confused
    Wondering if it's the things people say
    It wouldn't be on your mind
    If you hear "cute couple" everyday
    Have you ever been confused
    Thinking it's all in your mind
    Trusting you'll get over it
    If you just give it time
    Have you ever been confused
    The way I am right now
    Cause all of this confusion
    Has got me feeling down
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome ! welcome! welcome!

    :wave: welcome butterfly from da $$RICH$$ one high
    above up in da sky welcome into destee's place relax
    share awhile and smile as thingz take one's place
    :D be not confused never feel misused lean on me
    a friend indeed i feel ya emotions in this tyght flow
    of poetic notions welcome in upon family & friendz
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blaq

    Im confused most of the time so I can relate...lol Sometimes you gotta just roll wit it ma... I enjoyed your flow!

    Welcome!
    Reas
     
  4. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome... Welcome.
    Great flow... I look foward to read more.

    I feel U totally, I confused right now..
    :) :confused:

    Peace
     
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    This is tight!!!!!! Welcome to the Playground!!!!!!! I'm looking for more from you.....
     
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    :wave: :wave: Haaaaaay BlaqButterfly :wave: :wave:

    I'm so honored that you feel comfortable enough for our home to
    be the first place you share your poetry ... such an honor ... :love:

    If anyone was ever confused before, about the genuine love and
    respect we show each other and their poetry ... let it all end here.
    Please make yourself at home ... relax, laugh, enjoy and flow. :)

    Beautiful Peace ... I've been here too ... thanks for sharing.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome :wave: BlaqButterfly

    Honey Chile I'm confused all the dam time ....It's a wonder I can function among society :D

    tyght flow and definatley looking forward to more

    Natasha :heart:
     
  8. BlaqButterfly

    BlaqButterfly Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the kind words and warm welcome, everybody.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been there before more than once.
    I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. :)

    :wave: Welcome to Destee's


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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