Black Poetry : Confused

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 5, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confused

    Confused
    By the way you make me feel
    Confused
    How you make us seem so real
    Confused
    How you snuck into my mind
    Confused
    How my heart is willing to be blind
    Confused
    How much you make me want
    Confused
    How easy it is was to flaunt
    Us
    Me and you
    Together
    Out of the blue
    Confused
    I should be embarrassed but I can’t help but be excited
    Confused
    I was most definitely blind-sided
    Confused
    How easy it was to welcome you
    Confused
    At the very thought of receiving you
    Confused
    I’m caught off guard remembering when
    You touched me amidst all the confusion
    While my heart is breaking for some other brother
    My body is aching for yet another
    Ride with you
    Talk with you
    Laugh with you
    Confused
    Caught up in the chaos of your craziness
    Confused
    Stumbling around in a cloud of haziness
    Confused
    By how much I want
    Confused
    By how much you want
    Confused
    By the way you make me feel
    Confused
    How you make us seem so real
    Confused
     
  2. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha,
    Its feels good dont it
    Confusion is good at times
    nice piece. I feel you..

    MISTY
     
  3. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    :hot: thanks for this piece keep working i love this ****
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    natasha,
    real, real nice. i love the way this one kept me hittin
    the down arrow to scroll to the next
    line. clever way to put things in perspective.

    keep flowin sista,
    hw
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t get twisted (lol)
    Naw really, that’s the way it be some times.
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just letting you know that your poem gave me the jones for a new fix so i put it into words with my own poem "new drug"
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THanks !

    Nice when others get it :x:
    Shaz: Thanks babe I'll be sure to check it out !

    Hi-Wa : Thanks for the read and encouragement :D

    charleshandy : you are very welcome : I love this **** too !!!!! hahaha ;)

    Misty: yes : sometimes the confusion feels REAL good ! :x:
     
  8. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha... This was tyte like gnat booty. Ooooooooh weeeeee, I like this one a whole lot. Please excuse me for sounding like a cliche but... ****, I've been there! You've spoken my mind.

    Much :heart:
     
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    :grin:
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feeling!

    I know the feeling all to well, we tell the same story so
    many times...what a relief to see that someone else can
    feel what is in your heart and in your mind!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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