Quiet Poetry Lounge : CONFUSED

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    WHAT IS THIS THING CALLED LOVE ALL ABOUT
    I MEAN HOW IS IT SOMETHING THAT FEELS SO GOOD
    JUST AS EASILY FEEL SO BAD.
    CONFUSION SEEMS TO BE THE THEME
    OF THE DAY.
    MY HEAD SAYS WALK AWAY
    MY HEART SAYS STAY.
    THE PULL IS SO MAGNETIC
    THAT I COULDNT GET AWAY IF
    I TRIED.
    AN ADDICTION THAT TOOK PLACE
    WITHOUT MY KNOWLEDGE
    LIKE A NEW BORN YEARNING
    FOR MOTHER'S TOUCH
    NEEDING TO BE HELD AND LOVED
    TO HEAR THE HEART BEAT RYTHM TO
    SLEEP.
    YET EVERY BIT OF MY INTELLIGENCE
    TELLS ME THIS ISNT HOW LOVE IS SUPPOSE TO BE.
    AND STILL I STAY PUT WITH MY HEART OPEN
    AND RAW.
    CONFUSION SEEMS TO BE MY ONLY COMPANION.
    I SAY WHAT MY HEART FEELS I FEAR WHAT MY HEAD SAYS
    I WANNA RUN TO YOU AND FROM YOU.
    AND IM TIRED BECAUSE I SPENT ALL THIS TIME
    TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT TO DO WITH YOU
    TO YOU ABOUT YOU.
    YES CONFUSION SEEMS TO BE THE ONLY FEELING
    I KNOW AND RECOGNIZE.
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2005
    Messages:
    2,088
    Likes Received:
    38
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Full Time Student and Independant Buisness Owner
    Location:
    Life is waiting....
    Ratings:
    +38
    CONFUSION!!!!! smh
    Have you :qqb019:
    or:argue: Wit ya own self...smh
    It's Just important to do what is best for you
    and no body else...Of Course
    Good Scribe Sis.

    :10200:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Poetess, when you say...
    That pretty much sums it up in a nutshell. Great expression on that feeling that has us coming and going, instead of being certain in a relationship.
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    Thanks. Platinu for hearing me on this
    Watz thanks for the love.
    Letting feelings flow as usual.
     
  5. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 10, 2007
    Messages:
    996
    Likes Received:
    18
    Occupation:
    Finance & Endless Possibilities
    Location:
    Midwest
    Ratings:
    +18
    Wow! I feel like I wrote this...LOL!!! But you said it better than I could have ever thought...

    "An addiction that took place without my knowledge"...ain't that always how love goes...creeps up on us like a thief in the night!!!! Before you know it...we're somewhere we never thought we'd be...and CONFUSED!!!

    You broke it down my sister!!!!
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    sometime we get crossed in the maze of a mental play to stay or go !
    feeling them emotions flowing
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2004
    Messages:
    586
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    New Jersey
    Ratings:
    +16
    Hopless. That the great thing about this place. You can have feelings and look up and someone has penned them just rite. THank you for the love. Looking forward to what are like minds may have in common in the future.

    $$R$$
    You know that I always look forward to your feedback. THank you.
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    Hi thatgirl74
    Love is feeling. And we do at times become
    confused by the emotion that stirs within US.
    Its take over 90% of our being. And only time
    helps US to know if it's true love or a chance at it
    Very awesome flow sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
Loading...