Black Poetry : Confused

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Sep 12, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confused

    I flow well stomach like a hotel got large capacity but
    Dodge the nasty food and eat fruits beets and soup in a cup

    Rehearses rap wear FUBU like a nurse’s cap tend to the sick
    Bend MC’S like politics rhymes hit ears and offend them quick

    Legit and wise sincerely but criticize severely like the media
    Demand treasure to withstand the life’s pressure, like encyclopedias

    Vocabulary worth cash, feeble and whack sometime perform
    Illegal acts to survive like gangsters, found out crime is a storm

    Become grabber of souvenirs like travelers with brutal fears
    Wanna remember hard times and the retard grime drunk in feudal beers
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this one your creativity is great
    keep on flowing...making them MADD creations

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice .....
    and deep....


    :read:




    lighting up our heads with poetry weed...
    but sticking out our tongue,s while spiritual truth speeds.. :oops:



    Hey Mad rapper Poet...

    i,m going to do my best to read from you more ...
    it always take some time to read youre stuff cause youre deep to like Poets ought ..but when i got it i hear ya ...



    Keep writting bro!



    LOvelibertylady:heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i hear ya u mixing it up tyte !
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks for the props for real yall
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    your name so fits your flows..
    making me move with your rhythms
    and your rhymes
    then got to go back and check out
    my understanding of the line..
    and when I slow you down
    it's clear
    then i pick it up to your fast moving time
    and
    it's still clear

    flow on...flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome brutha keep da lyrical maze flowing in word up !
     
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