Black Poetry : Confused

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your beauty was what
    first caught my eye...
    You told me to call
    you sometime and
    I knew I had to make
    you mine...You amazed
    me when I found out your
    intelectual matched up with
    your physical...I had to work
    up the nerve to let you know
    how much I was feeling you,
    and all the things I wanted to
    do to you, and to let you know
    I thought you were so beautiful...
    I finally did and I guess you were
    flattered to say the least...After
    that I went out my way for you
    tried to make you feel good in
    any way I could...I finally got a
    touch from you, and even a
    kiss, but there was something
    I missed you told me you had
    a man, or a friend whatever he
    is to you, but you got me thinking
    what the fu(k does he do?
    I can't lie when you first told me
    I thought you were a fool, but
    I knew there was nothing I could
    do...One day again you gave me
    that touch and kiss, but again
    there was something I missed...
    You stopped me telling me you
    wanted me, but then again
    you didn't, you had me all
    confused like what the fu(k
    am I to do...You told me you
    couldn't let this happen again,
    but I wasn't so content...Maybe
    one day I'll give up on you, but
    for now you still got me wanting
    you...
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow, u keep the pen moving on...im reading u. :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop and da motions dis have one feeling
    very nicely pose'd
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting but not able to have, many can feel ya on this one, nice flow.
     
  5. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE FLOW

    Very licenly wrote, very very deeply thought. I'm in a similar situation and it sucks. :) but very nice scribe
    One_Love
     
  6. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea wanting someone you cant have is the worse but sometimes when u do get that person things aint as good as you would think they would be so that sucks to
     
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