Black Poetry : Confused Heart

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As she spoke, I listened
    Yet couldnt' here a word
    Echoes from a confuse heart
    The only sounds I heard
    Help Im falling
    No wait, Im trapped in a maze
    The rhythmless beat of a confuse heart
    Has left me in a daze
    A baffled state, disorientated funk
    I wish someone could understand
    Am I fallen in love?
    Loosing my mind?
    Nothing concrete in the palm of these hands
    Echoes from a confused heart is all I know
    The faint beats, like a low mummur
    reminds me nothings fo show!!

    Copyrighted By: J. Plummer
    BY:Lj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    likes
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing is for sure it's true....
    but we do know the mind can get confused if not focus.
    this was a tight piece...keep it comming, I enjoy reading.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Poet of the week :)

    I see you shining brother. This is another tyte drop you laid on us...keep um comin
     
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    Awe!
    This is heartfelt!
    Could actually feel
    the agony of the
    confusd heart!
    Tyte drop! Loved it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AWESOME FLOWING BRUH !!!!
    U SHINNING BRIGHT
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the feelings run in the mind so fast you don't know if you're coming or going, you put these feelings into words so well.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: THNKS FAM FOR THE READ :thanks:
     
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    Man, I'm definitely feelin' this one!
     
  10. angelicsage

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    the heart...so infamous for
    it's confusion...when it's falling
    in love...

    nice flow...Poet of the Week...
     
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