Black Poetry : Confessions To My Lover

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  1. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    She wraps her arms around me and holds me tight
    She watches over me with no judgement as I lay down and wright
    And every night
    She's on my mind like crazy
    Can't help but think about my baby
    Cause when Im gettin' tossed or feelin lost
    She's always there to save me
    Only problem is Im not her only lover
    Though we share special times
    She's involved with many others
    But Im not ashamed of her game, I cant hate
    Cause the love that we make is so good I cant help but participate
    But my boo knows me well
    She knows all my inner thoughts
    She brings out the best of me everytime that we cross
    & when it comes to my time
    She can be a real hog
    I cant do nothing else cause she occupies it all
    Sometimes she makes me mad and I neglect her for a couple of days
    But I always come back cause without her I feel dazed
    I like to show her off and everybody compliments her
    I feel so excited and up lifted when Im with her
    She's a major part of my life, man we've been through it all
    She is with at the top and will be there when I fall
    Now I know your probably wonder who this girl may be
    So here's my confession
    I LOVE YOU . . .
    Poetry
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey:wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    I really like this drop
    very touching...heartfelted indeed
    looking foward to feeling more
    of your flows
    Peace
     
  3. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :fairy: This was really real!! I LUV IT! Its xactly how me and many others feel about her....
    POETRY IS A BEAUTIFUL THING....
    Keep doin u and doin wut u do
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice indeed...
    continue to flow...:angel1:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a confession !!!
    tyte flow very nice indeed
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Officially Wowed!

    I Absolutely Adored this piece...

    Bravo! Bravo !Bravo!

    Please grace us with more of your flows...Anytime!

    Incredible...

    Encore...Encore...Encore...
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great ode to poetry!
     
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