Quiet Poetry Lounge : CONFESSION

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside the middle soul
    where something has pitted cold
    i fancied myself immune
    to all the uncertainties of infatuation
    caught in the mist of being lost
    somehow paying the cost
    from the slumbering puberty
    like da last tyme in my mind
    i endured such deep confrontation

    But every time i close my eyes
    not no more them a moment of time
    all i can envision is you in my mind
    the beauty and love ummm so fine
    i know thy fate still in shine
    but somewhere inside i'm dying
    i would not have pose such hope
    if i would have know i'll hang from da rope
    loop in the maze dat got me daze

    I've abandon myself at the whims of emotion
    yet i have this deep desire and compassion
    as i state my claim inside this confession
    under commanding love i offer thee & obsession
    through my soulful affection
    i so loveth thee , u be one magnificent prize
    unto me and upon my eyez
    i'm no lie nor an illusion , my love is real
    and what i feel lives inside da fate of our destiny
    rose of rapture and love
    i vow thy promise that we are and will be
    ya da queen for me at the sight of God's eyez.

    Thy confession of truth pt.II (next)
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been here before and the feelin is stronger thatn the will of the individual and it feels like I can't breathe for the thought of what took me so long to realize I was nto immune to the things I could not see coming and this type of drowning that feels so good is so cativating that i couldn't let the feeling or the person go. You touched on so many of the things that I feel everyday that it almost brings a tear to my eye and its such a blessing to be one so fortunate as to be chosen to embrace Love's Intoxication in the way that so few have. I thank you for this.
     
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    There IS a ribbon in the sky...

    Oh $$RICH$$. I absolutely love the way you confessed in the form of amor on papyrus:blush: If anything I'll give this one:

    4:spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar:

    4 stars in motion
    for this sycker than syck poetic "love potion"

    :picture:

    :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Most welcome and yes sometime what's pitted deep inside that feels
    so good and intoxicated can take u deep and fast that will leave a feeling
    inside that will have you lost.

    Thankz soulful2006 for the love and visit within my space of realism
     
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    ahhh yes spicybrown da confession speaks out happy u can relate
    to where my heart was pointing to....Thank you my dear for the love & visit
     
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    $$RICH$$ SUGA YOU HAVE ME IN A DAZE OF YOUR EMOTIONS.TO HAVE A FEELING SUCH AS THIS IS TRULY A GIFT BECAUSE YOU HAVE ABSOLUTLY INVADED MY THOUGHTS, AND MY SOUL I REALLY DO THINK YOU ARE SNEAKING INTO MY DREAMS AND VISIONS THIS WAS A FANTASTIC WRITE I LOVE IT SUGA I DO

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    They say confession is good for the soul
    And here you sit baring yours
    All I want to do is hold you
    And not say one word
    Just let my heart speak
    Caress you ever so sweetly
    You are as special as special can be to me
    Please accept my apology
    I know you never intended to hurt me
    I am lifted to a new height
    Everything will be alright:kiss1:


    $$RICH$$ this piece is ever so beautiful.
     
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    sweettee honey it's known that i am the dream catcher
    and a wish master next time you close your eyez it will
    be i that enters . Thank you my dear...............................


    4EVERLUV did you feel me and heard thy confession
    of realism and truth forth that i am , as pt 2 will reveal
    all one's mind wonders stay tune and thankz for the love
    and warm visit .
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,
    Felt every word. Im going to
    start bringing the kleenex to the computer
    you keep wettn' my eyez
    Its all good though.

    Your ever so welcome my dear heart.
     
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    likewise 4EVERLUV............
     
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