Black Poetry : Confession of a broken heart

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She prompted
    Stolen moments and whispers of right now not forever.

    Parallelled with wondering and clock watching fighting the
    urge to pick up the phone.
    What was it about her that caused you to lose
    sight of what was oh so special?
    What was it about me that made her seem much more desirable?
    Confrontation with tears and hard words sorry's and I love you's.
    All because she came into your life one day.
    And now she is gone about her business no more is she
    worried about you who she claimed to need so much.
    And yet she seems to linger in my head and make me wonder
    what it was about her that made her your desire for the moment and my
    tormenter for a life time.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well scribed piece i feel ya on dis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thangs that make you say, hmmmmm. Yes, this was deeply felt.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems maybe I let some of the cat out the bag?
    Only way to say what I am really thinking.
    Thanks for "listening".
    And feeling it too.
     
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