Black Poetry : Conditions......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 12, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True conditions......
    of thy .........heart....
    Cross the ocean shore
    Lay black sand and ruby
    Starz over blue water
    Smooth passion
    I fall for you
    Candle light nights
    And dancing near the edge
    To soft jazz
    as my body sways to yours
    The dream becomes reality
    It wasn’t far as it may seems
    For I believe
    We stand hand and hand
    As you hold the key to us…
    Something in between and it was you
    No more tears..washing my fears
    I am not afraid to love again….
    Like a rose petal blooming
    For spring rains and summer sun
    My heart yearns for you
    You woke up what was died
    Restless nights … I talk with my heart
    And its ready to spread its wings
    I don’t want us to fall apart
    This is my wish…
    So I ask my heart why is it so sure?
    And it tells me your heart is pure
    Cross the ocean shore
    Lay black sand and ruby
    Starz over blue water
    I fall for you
    I just want to live….
    Like the river to the sea…
    As our love grows and flows.
    Become one with you
    And not be afraid to love you
    So I walk with you…
    Upon the moon over the horizon
    To something new to spread my wings
    Somewhere in between
    You found me..
    And
    …………… I found you


    (C) 2004
    mzblkangel
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done love how this poured out
     
  3. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    great structure...excelent flow
    nicely put.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful images in this, very serene read.
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully put...I fekt this piece as I was "reading and wishing", that's what I call love. I really enjoyed reading this, thanks.
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    OooooH!

    Sounds like love is brewing! :love:

    I think I'm jealous but happy for
    ya too! :madd: :luvv: :lol:

    Beautiful Write Sis!

    Lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich..thank you for the love on dis happy you likes.... :wink:

    who~is~she..thanks

    watzinaname..thank you

    queentswana..thank you sis for letting me know you enjoyed

    PurpleMoons..lol glad ya enjoyed and happy you did...lol...smh
    love you sis!!!!! thank you :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Yeah Purplemoons...sounds like her blood is boiling for this special someone. Her head is in the clouds...fantasizing, day dreaming all the day long. Watch your step...you may trip and fall. :lol:

    :thanks: for letting us enjoy the fantasy of your special someone.

    :toast:
     
  9. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE, IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL, MUCH LOVE IS BEING EXPRESS.
     
  10. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Mz Black! What a softness......
     
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