Black Poetry : Concubine

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I didn’t intend to be your concubine
    But there was something about your charisma that charismatically magnetized me
    U were my forbidden destination and like fallen leaves off of maple trees
    I flew to u and u were my sugar based brotha
    Your brute force taunted my hormones of sexual tendencies and u pleased me in ways that shouldn’t exist

    I was your concubine

    And you were a sort of fine that left my fingertips tingling with aspiration
    Masturbation what?
    I lost it right along with my humanistic sanity
    I was senseless for you
    U crazed me and I fell freely under your manhood
    I laid still in my poise of you igniting my body
    I was so hot that it seemed like my waterfalls
    Fells straight to the bed
    It was so good that hallucinations replaced my thoughts
    Heaven had my hands and hell had my feet
    And

    I was your concubine

    So you therefore felt the need to beyond please
    And in a non-systematic fashion you flipped our action
    And like farris wheels on a hot Florida afternoon
    I was 98 degrees high
    I looked around for the ground and when my vision caught its eye
    I did nothing because
    I was high
    Perspiration became our flesh
    But I kept wanting
    Wanting and wanting
    Until I had
    Every ounce of your physicality
    Your spirituality
    My King
    All of you is mine
    And I am your Queen
    And faithful concubine



    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    Reeeh........... that's heaviness
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...i like this...well written
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u posed a tyte scribe
    that's very felt yes indeed
    wow!
     
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    tyte *** flow :)
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! I understand these words more than I would like to...
    Girl, been there...............the passion, lust and love........is
    inescapable......

    This flow was on point!
    Peace,
    Angelic
     
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    Hey Soullyricist
    this is very nice flow
    Peace
     
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