Quiet Poetry Lounge : Concede To Love

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    I'm sorry this be my chosen mode to confess
    But, it's better this way than to suppress
    My heart and avoid any more progress
    Between you and me
    I'm sorry but this was my best way to address
    How I can't continue to accept your soft caress
    When, inside, I continue to accept and assess
    How love don't love me
    So, I'm going to set you free
    But I hope for you love's success
    In the next woman's heart you possess.... ​





    (This piece was written for "Walk Away From Love" by David Ruffin.)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....the heart depth and emotion felt within these lines had me like this all it takes
    to release and free one ......
     
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    Well, sometimes, you just hafta walk away. Sometimes, it hurts more to stay.
     
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    true dat sis sometime what's done is needed i agree this was on point
     
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    truth spoken here as love is conceded!
     
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