Black Poetry : COMPUTER RENDEZ-VOUS.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Mar 26, 2006.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *nods head to "Computer Love" beat*

    Come go with me, let's make memories as I speak,

    seduce me with a few keystrokes, get me high, make me tweak,

    SHIFT my mood to a euphoric stance,

    U & I are close together, but give me SPACE so I can dance,

    CONTROL yourself boo, dont wanna rush this splendid moment,

    gaze deep into my eyes, spin me around, our F8 we can't control it,

    so let's just PAUSE and cherish the time,

    we invest in each other to ESCAPE a world unkind,

    ENTER my matrix groove.....lose your self in ultra poetic pleasure,

    where possibilities never END, only your smile will be the measure,

    of satisfaction recieved,

    but right about now I believe,

    it's time to wrap this up and take it HOME,

    I hope this COMPUTER LOVE is forever etched in ya dome.


    :geek: :heart:

    :smooch:
     
  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <floats in>

    Enjoyed reading this poem very much. And I really loved the inclusion of computer lingo and syntax, it definitely reinforces the title. Extremely creative!

    Keep the words moving poet.

    <floats out>
     
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    my oh my somebody been putting on that computa luv xtra thick. mmmhhm
    who could it be huh? im in love with a member. that's your theme song isnt it. just kidding baby gurl. gotta keep ahead of ya.
    :ilu: :dance3: :spinn: :vball:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Shift da Space of U & I
    as we F8 under Control
    without a Pause on what
    we have to share so let's
    take an Escape route
    and Enter this exsitance
    of lasting memories of us
    and End up at Home alone
    just us two and that it's cherished.

    This was awesome creative artistic work sista...
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You, Thank You, this one goes out to my Computer Love from up above:)
     
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    SpiceyBrown, we've got to stop meeting like this, it overloads my memory.


    Much love.
     
  7. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1PoetSought..........

    Well, we all know the information highway has plenty of traffic, which makes it a HARD DRIVE to reach you. Your poetry is brilliant, Me thinks you deserve a COOKIE! :thanks:
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$............

    Thankya Brother $$RICH$$, I'm in awe over your comeback.....snappy, fresh, and always sincere

    :geek: :heart:
     
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    computer mase of soft ivory keys
    the F5 to surely please
    click of Alt on the low
    shift Ctrl and enter to da core
    mask in beauty of u and i
    never end, page up, num lock
    for a feasta of puter magic

    Most welcome sista and ya alwayz on hit
    like a screen bliss of deep vision i pose
     
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    This was very creative.
    like it....Alot.
     
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