Black Poetry : Compression

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Trying to replace and forget
    making changes in the mind
    with the old and new in time
    trying to make sense of it all
    from the heart when da mind call
    through the mind for the heart to reach out
    sometime it leaves u wondering what !

    This was on point and make u think.
     
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    Wow! DSS, I felt like you were talking to me. Changes...and how the heart speaks to the mind...and the mind speak back to the heart. Really a simple concept but we make things harder than they need to be. So true!!!! Loved this Poet!!!!
     
  4. MRS. LADY

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    I sure hope your heart wins :)

    wow again....

    surprised by this side in ur writing for real...

    i like it ....
     
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    Yes, sometimes you have to follow your heart. Changes can be scary, but often they are for the good. Tight write So'ja.
     
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    I wan be taking a part.. my heart
    It never really was put together right...
    don't matter what cards.. as long as they play'd right...

    my heart speaks to my mind all the time..
    you my hustle.. and love is the grind

    and imma do this right here...

    you can run.. but you can't hide anywhere....
    because my dear.. this is the year....
    to take it where...

    your mind won't let you go...

    I'm going there....
    I can make my dreams come true...
    and now,
    Your a part of that to!

    again,

    run.. I'll let you get a head start.....
    I know a shortcut.... and that's thru your heart!

    And I'm honor'd

    that you let me touch that spot!!
     
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    Hey DSS
    I love this flow.
    The intensity in this drop
    Just open me up.
    Loving the peaceful feeling
    I'm getting from your drop my brother

    Peace~N~Love