Black Poetry : Compressed Air

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Nov 6, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Compressed Air

    Prefer fear over a stir in the atmosphere this could bring
    A storm and ring the alarm like Huricane Katrina cling
    to the city right now just a light breeze but a tight squeeze
    wind damage will begin to sandwich residents and freeze
    transportation, have to live new ways for a few days yall
    experience all sorts of talk during a short walk to the store calls
    on my cell phone from well known folks “hello girl friend
    you make my world spin” rumor and humor in the air that we end
    our relationship and broke up and spoke corrupt of each other
    her jaw dimples great made a simple mistake that’s hard to smother
    fast with ill facts keep a gas filled sack of mad flavor to smack
    and kill bad behavior, great wisdom is like a brake system act
    and stop on a dime then I drop rhymes with that rhythm intact
    Flow pride and this provide lyrical support to the rap game
    And dismiss whackness starts new twist in practice aimed
    To help those that step on the toes of crime and goes to do time
    In correction facilities, they rejected knowledge as their brain intertwine
    With society and collected garbage which produced nothing fine
    Was a kid right at midnight off the air in a lost affair my mind was
    Puzzled in love been a thug all my life a wall of strife exists cuz
    Big fatality need originality and freshness in my early work
    Worldly hurt in Hip Hop made me trip a lot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe that compress it's way out into a deep release
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With each new experience, a slightly different flavor is brought to the flow rhymebad.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YALL