Black Poetry : Complicated

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Best Friend,

    Conversations that started out very
    general got really personal really fast.
    Accdently bumping into each other on
    purpose.
    Long lunch breaks and late arrivals
    to work.
    All for the stolen moment that is
    so forbidden.
    Your love for him has some how
    transferred to me and my love for
    him has trickled down onto you.
    And what we are doing is so wrong but
    feels so good.
    And when we turn to walk away we
    just seem to find our selves finding
    ways to continue to make this work.
    If he finds out he'll kill you
    because you crossed into a territory
    so taboo that there is no
    explaining. And I, well I can not even think about
    what I would be losing.
    There is no exscuse for this,
    no way to justify.
    But for now my kids will continue to call
    you uncle and my husband will call
    you brother as I call you lover.

    How more complicated can this get?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    this here took me somewhere
    very deep and i felt the electromatic squeez
    can't get no complicated and very clear
    tyte mental drop here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's complicated alright, no way that would work out...another well written piece.
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That piece was born from some reallife and some ficticious things. But in reality I see how easy it is for that to happen as well as how hard it is to get out of it.
    Thanks for the feedback. :star:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice tight piece.
    with surprises in it..
    thanks..
     
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    gosh you are so nice
    we your flows
    lovely drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    so sad....smh

    This is a very complicated situation. I don't know if this story is true, but since you are married, that is the ONLY relationship you should be putting your time into.The special thing about marriage is God has blessed that bond. If you pray and ask for 4giveness and strength, God will see you thru. My husband and I are going thru divorce right now.We were married almost 8 years, together for 10. He cheated and that destroyed our relationship, not because I wouldn't 4give him, but because he didn't feel he was worthy of 4giveness. In the eyes of God, your marriage is top priority.Save your marriage before it's too late.
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    Nita,

    My heart aches for you. I hope that you and your husband will discover that it is not too late for you either. Sometimes a period of separation can give people the space and perspective they need to come even closer. That means you don't have to think of it as being over if you really don't want it to be.
     
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    Nita,
    This piece is not a true story of what happened but it is true of what almost happened. I do understand what you mean and I am so aware that my marriage is the only relationship worth focussing on. This piece just came as do many of my other pieces true life encounters and my imagination have a way of springing forth into these writings. I do apologize if I bought up bad memories for you. Not my intent. :grouphug:

    Smooches,
    Thatgirl74
     
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