Black Poetry : Complicated

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, May 21, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flush u out my system,
    Swoosh ur gone,
    So long.
    Steady thinkin about someone i never had.
    Can't let this become a fad.
    Too late, memories is all i have.
    Memories of me lovin u.
    U not wantin to give me a clue,
    Of what i did 2 u.
    I know what u did 2 me.
    Can't u see?
    I fell in love w/u!
    Yea, its true,
    I was grinnin every time i saw u.
    Was mad happy 2 b around u.
    My moms peeped it 2, always said
    "Why u grinnin like a chessire cat?".
    Can u believe that??
    Talkin 4 hours on end,
    Couldnt tell where the night ended
    And my love 4 u began.
    U loved me 2.
    I wanted 2 run,
    Jump on u.
    I couldn't act a fool.
    I had 2 keep my cool.
    Instantly doubted ur words,
    Only because i felt u were tryin to spare me.
    Why couldn't u just b real w/me?
    I had 2 think about it.....
    U really do care,
    Unless u wouldn't have been there.
    What am i supposed 2 do now?
    A couple of years later,
    My feelins still the same.
    Please, i don't wanna play this game.....
    I wanna know
    How the fu%! do i let go....
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like the honest emotion displayed here. Go ahead...
    Smile, like a Cheshire cat!

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 1poetsought....wasnt quite sure if people would get this. im glad u liked it. much love........ :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmmmm!! nothing wrong wit smiling big
    let it show !!
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u r 2 much $Rich$.....much love. :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing and you kno it gurl go ahead and flex that koolaid smile peace and blessins keep flowin :):):)
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :waivin at serenti: im waitin on somethin new gurl much love.......:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...u know i'm lovin' it!...emotional too...

    ~lovely~
     
  9. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx lovelygolden1.........im glad u enjoyed. i seem to b in an emotional n complicated state of mind over this.........much love :)
     
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    i know how you feel scarcasm...
    its hard being with someone not knowing how they truely feel
    its even worse when you are in love with em

    heart felt scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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