Black Poetry : Complicated(from the archives)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Mar 25, 2004.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flush u out my system,
    Swoosh ur gone,
    So long.
    Steady thinkin about someone i never had.
    Can't let this become a fad.
    Too late, memories is all i have.
    Memories of me lovin u.
    U not wantin to give me a clue,
    Of what i did 2 u.
    I know what u did 2 me.
    Can't u see?
    I fell in love w/u!
    Yea, its true,
    I was grinnin every time i saw u.
    Was mad happy 2 b around u.
    My moms peeped it 2, always said
    "Why u grinnin like a chessire cat?".
    Can u believe that??
    Talkin 4 hours on end,
    Couldnt tell where the night ended
    And my love 4 u began.
    U loved me 2.
    I wanted 2 run,
    Jump on u.
    I couldn't act a fool.
    I had 2 keep my cool.
    Instantly doubted ur words,
    Only because i felt u were tryin to spare me.
    Why couldn't u just b real w/me?
    I had 2 think about it.....
    U really do care,
    Unless u wouldn't have been there.
    What am i supposed 2 do now?
    A couple of years later,
    My feelins still the same.
    Please, i don't wanna play this game.....
    I wanna know
    How the fu%! do i let go....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now hummmmmm!!
    don't know but dis was awesomely tyte
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You already took the first step, you admitted you need to release it. This was very well written.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flow and release
    tight drop
    i likes and relates
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight flow
    deep indeed
    keep the
    flow coming
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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