Black Poetry : Complicated (A Sarcasm Classic)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    decided to take you guys waaay back on this one..enjoy.

    Flush u out my system,
    Swoosh ur gone,
    So long.
    Steady thinking about someone I never had.
    Can't let this become a fad.
    Too late, memories is all I have.
    Memories of me loving u.
    U not wanting to give me a clue,
    Of what I did to u.
    I know what you did to me.
    Cant u see?
    I fell in love w/u!
    Yea, its true,
    I was grinning everytime I saw u.
    Was mad happy to be around u.
    My moms peeped it to, always said
    "Why u grinning like a chesire cat?"
    Can u believe that??
    Talking for hours on end,
    Couldnt tell where the night ended,
    And my love for you began.
    U loved me too.
    I wanted to run,
    Jump on u.
    I couldnt act a fool.
    I had to keep my cool.
    Instantly doubted your words,
    Only b/c I felt u were trying to spare me.
    Why couldnt u just be real with me?
    I had to think about it...
    U really do care,
    Unless u wouldnt have been there.
    What am I supposed to do now?
    A couple of yrs later,
    My feelings still the same.
    Please, I dont wanna play this game...
    I wanna know
    How the fucc do I let go....


    Stay tuned for pt.2
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When your heart is in deep, but you're uncertain of his true intentions, yes it gets complicated. You posed those uncertain feelings to a "T". Great write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we often uncertain when one send mix messages and feelings
    deep scribe well felt for certain
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    it's hard to break away

    but you can do bad all by dolo

    yes we all go through this

    it's called wanting to be loved

    IN THE RIGHT WAY

    also you made a comment in my other piece about the avatar i was using and i answered it and here's your comment:


    #36 Yesterday, 12:00 AM
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    tyte poem. never forget where you come from, always keep ur eyes open and xpand your horizons. that's what society hates.

    why u dont got Euclid up there?lol

    so i wrote

    why do you put New York City as your location?

    are you from here? if so where are you reppin' poet?

    most people that live here don't really say New York City if they're a REAL in bred new yorker because you usually rep your area i.e. the Bronx/Fordham, South Bronx, Manhattan/ the Barrerio, Harlem, Lower East Side, Chelsea/Soho Upper West Side, Brooklyn/ Coney Island, Fort Greene, Williamsburg, Bensonhurst, Canarsie, Flatbush or Queens/ Queensbridge/LIC, Flushing, St Albans, South Ozone, Jamaica, Far Rockaway or Staten Island

    peace poet when i see you in the streets:welldone:
     
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  6. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i absolutely love this! mostly cause i can relate....i like it...very funny and cute...:)
     
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