Black Poetry : Complex Melodies..

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  1. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Complex Melodies

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    I have emotions for this Complex Melody
    Supressed feelings are brought to the surface
    I gave myself to harmony
    And he touched every key
    Played me in so many combinations
    It's only a classical thought
    But with me his movements were different
    A moment longer with him
    I need to step aside
    I love what he chose for me to see
    Because this COMPLEX MELODY
    He....Moves me
    Descriptions of these......
    I dont even know what to call it
    Maybe i'll call him unfamiliar
    I'VE NEVER FELT LIKE THIS
    Perhaps it was so long ago
    He feels through his music
    And i think to myself
    WE MADE MuSic
    oohs and aahs
    There was no need for yes and no's
    My Complex Melody already knew

    What have i DONE
    My ink bleeds thoughts
    Can i get him to understand?
    That what i feel is beyond his physical presence
    That inside my heart beats differently
    That his comfort brings me to this zone
    Im relaxed

    Sooo into you
    This moment, It could last forever
    I'm caught up in your rapture
    Maybe I'm ahead of myself
    He only wanted to make me smile
    Im indulging in what he considers to be a temporary fix
    Lets forget about his and my problems
    **** this is so complex
    If he only knew

    That right now
    I've been observing him
    Feeling him personally
    But i'm in acoma
    I can't I will not wake up from this slumber
    I wanna get lost in COMPLEX MeLoDiEs
    Perhaps then he could understand
    That this may be the only way to make him permanent
    Cause right now im not prepared to wake up
    I Want
    I Need him to almost embrace it
    The simplicity of such a melody
    Me....
    My melody wants you to feel that
    I wanna pursue you.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so intricately posed, delving into every measure, a perfect complement to his complex melodies. Loving this, poetess. Welcome back! :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like stormz of musical maze in sweet melodies dat's Versatile only u can express so well and in depth
    love da flava here nice to feel ya ink again
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    welcome back

    i'm definitley feeling your pure essence here

    the essence of how one makes you feel

    and i'm not mad at the quest

    go get yours as they used to say
     
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    I Love the creativity of this piece...

    welcome, versatile.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I consider myself a sincere appreciator of the gift of music in all its melodic harmonic glories
    SO... I was really feeling this joint :read:
    looking forward to more from you :)
     
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