Black Poetry : completion

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I could never take da place of one's love
    but what i could bring is new from above
    my heart of trust and truth
    respect, honor and love to roost

    Your da completion to my half
    given a chance i'll make it last
    I've given myself to love so long ago
    open my heart like an swinging door

    Here yet i'm hangin with what i'z dealing
    from what my soul is deeply feeling
    I learned to be a proven friend
    but down inside i'm ready to mend

    I heard ya inner cry
    wit emotions and reasons why
    but you are da apple of my eye
    I love you , i tell you no lie

    I will not deem da sunship we have
    if given a key i would open new doors
    to feeling you never had before
    shower you in warm embrace to da core

    I'm sitting here like an open book
    why be afraid come take a look
    see all the wonders inside
    taste a blessing enjoy the ride

    Feel da passion of heart
    let me enter to venture inside
    if only you knew what i feel
    hear me love as i keep it real

    Only you is my completion.


     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Rich, you could melt an iceberg!

    Any woman whose heart remains closed to the heart behind these words AINT HUMAN! lol
     
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    lol......why thank you
     
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    As we know, it takes that special one to make us complete...wonderful complete drop poet.
     
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    thank u sistah Queent........so true very true
     
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    when love arise in new age of tyme for only one brings in harmony is the other half of
    completion to the heart, for only one will know and feel it until the other accept it to
    know it's real then it's complete.
     
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