Black Poetry : Completely Alone(haiku)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm very nice

    alone silent mental
    ya mindful thoughts
    of emotion
     
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    the sound of silence

    is deafening....amazing how we have to shut out the extraneous noise in order to 'hear'.

    this is outstanding, cocobutterskyn....wonderful!!!

    thank you

    a
     
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    Alone…
    I have cried the tears
    Of a hundred ages
    Yet, I stand before you
    Strong
    My heart stronger
    Than the pain I’ve endured
    For so long…

    Apologize
    …I do
    for keeping you down for so long
    forgive my trespasses
    and all my
    wrongs

    please!!!

    may i share this moment of ALONEness with you?:)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moves ova.....com'on, I'd love to. Especially if I get to read you:)

    Gotz madd respect 4 your work:heart:
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're confused, my lovely...

    it is I who have madd luv for you...and your work:).

    One
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco

    was it you who only yesterday said.."is this a haiku"...

    you have it nailed gurl...

    and I agree with A...silence can be so deafening at times it almost roars...and it can be so painful...

    great piece....

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have out done ya self!

    Excellent Cocobrown one! Just so easy and so true!
     
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    God is always there
    waiting on us to listen
    But the choice is ours


    I understand what you mean
    VirtuousDove
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$~You are so good for me. Thank you :kiss:

    Alyce~ You are so right about that. Thank you:)

    Baller~ Again, thank you :blush:

    Kitana~ Yes it was :) Thank you.

    Ms B~ Thanks for showin love :heart:

    Dove~ You have flow'd the truth there. Thank you :)

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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