Black Poetry : Compassionate....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Youre kisses are so gently....
    It feels like thousands of butterfly,s..
    have landed on my body...
    Youre lips are rollerskating on my breasts..
    making pirouettes around around my nipples
    You slide down to my bellybutton....
    making me laugh softly.....
    After that youre hitting the road...
    and go down the valley...
    making a ****tstop...
    Youre tongue starts dancing ..
    "'the Twist"".........
    folowing by
    "'the Swanlake""
    and you end up...
    "'Dirty dancing"'......

    Thelepaticly i want to say to you...
    "'can i let it out""cause i,m holding it..
    inside...
    I,m afraid...
    but you already picked up the sign..
    and say on a wispering tone..

    go a head...
    my baby..
     
  2. MissPeachy

    MissPeachy New Member MEMBER

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    this is super hot
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOvleyGolden one...thanks its you.........you are getting married!
    thats funny i just posted a poem ...."'i have a date""
    its youres Shine girl!!!!!!! bless ya..and remember....
    even in hard times trust in god.......God is the greatest!
    Miss peachy..thanks ........i, kinda blush here because i normaly never do this kinda poems If you know whatamean.....lol
    but i found some old poems and i thought this one is funny......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heatwaves look out
    bout to come from flyte
    dis was pure heat whewwwwwwwwwww!
     
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    WOW!!! it took me while to respond my screen kept fogging up!! :) This is hot! :)
     
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