Black Poetry : ".. communion "

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    here is my cup, queen
    filled with love
    passion
    desire...
    drink this... fire
    in the clear of the night
    to the cusp of morning's light
    you are
    you were
    you will be soul of my own
    flesh of my own
    drink and let's give a toast to a love that's universally known
    felt
    heard
    seen
    this is my cup queen...
    my body
    my mind
    my everything


    communion
     
  2. watzinaname

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    Such a regally elegant scribe to your queen. Very nice to read something from you j'hiah.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful sips of love here tyte bruh !
     
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    So nice to read you again, j'hiah - you've been missed. What a beautiful way to re-enter the room. Toastin you............
     
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    Now this is what love is. :welldone:
     
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    this was a beautiful poem
     
  7. queentswana

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    I'll sip from your cup ...ever so slow
    and savior each moment, as I go

    Each taste bud will waken ...and hunger for more
    I'll catch every drop, that leak from your pore

    Both "mind" and "soul" ...will we entwine
    as I'll be your's ...and you'll be mines​

    What a beautiful drop to your Queen, I enjoyed reading of divine love, it was good to read you.
     
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    nah uh QQ look whos back hehehe

    so I see 2005 brings that effervescent strong poetic JH flava

    bravo bravo bravo
     
  9. angelicsage

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    ....this one has been long awaited :)

    but I must say...

    it was worth it


    ...Spiritually and methodically addictive prose

    and you already know

    ...I'm loving it!
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do give this piece ...a second round of "Appluse" ...yes, it was just that sweet.
     
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