Black Poetry : communication

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Aug 25, 2001.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish i could just feel
    and not have to speak
    because my soul
    never stutters

    i wish you could get inside
    and experience
    because words
    never interrupt my spiritual expression

    someday
    you will
    know me
    feel me
    synchronized heartbeats
    a manifestation
    of us becoming
    one

    through your kisses
    you'll taste what i have to say

    the rate of my breathing
    tells you my degree of inner peace

    one day
    we will know everything
    about each other
    and never have
    to say
    one
    word

    *waiting*

    d08
    (c)2001
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva.


    i Ab-So-Lute-Ly llllllove this piece.

    wait on it gurl! it will be divine. words won't
    be necessary... :)

    Mama Always Says:
    anything worth having is worth waiting for.

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the most beautiful experiences happen...

    during uninterrupted silence. THANK YOU for reminding me of this.
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this...

    in my spirit...
    because i know...
    if only, sis...if only...

    thanks~
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...

    you would have to be in my head too to know how i much i feel this one diva08...

    this flowed naturally..

    classic composition :wink:
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to reach such heights with another would be.....simply divine..
    beautiful words....

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIVA08

    U ALWAYZ KOW HOW TO CAPTURE ME
    LOVE THIS AND THE UNTOUCHED MENTAL WORDZ
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms Diva,

    As always....awesome.

    BE
     
  9. poeticdelight

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    enjoyed this flowed as always

    keep flowin'

    pd
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nycely written, dear poetess.
     
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