Black Poetry : COMMUNICATION LINE BROKEN AGAIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I knocked,i dailed,i scream & frown
    seem like the line is broken down
    i guess it's true , what should i do
    the line is broken i don't hear from u
    crossin streams living deep in dreams
    every hope and prayer stacked in lairs
    the communication line broken again
    this not how we should end
    so patiently i wait in this daily fate
    leaving me in reflection of morrow
    looking hour after hour for this flower
    there was no call not even a sound
    feel like ya heart has left this town
    clutching to my last line
    with great casualties and confident
    that this communa will open wide
    one, just one last time
    to pacify soulfully in warm embrace
    to let this line of love take it's place
    so we can communicate and trace
    our happiness in this sweet lovelace
    but seem like the line is broken again
    what's wrong did i sin
    how can a man worth win
    when you turn blind from deep within
    the communication broken again......:cry:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you speak from the heart
    she will certainly hear
    that's where all truths reside
    no need to shed one salty tear

    Very emotive piece, this piece has a multitude of layers.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sista watz and you right , so i'll just smile ......
     
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    it tears my heart to be away from you
    it seems all i listen for is the telephone to ring what's a girl to do

    when she feels the one thing that she values the most
    is no longer a feeling that she wants to boast

    because the light and love between us had died
    and the love that we used to share isnt fit to tied

    what right do we have to just through away all what we dared
    could it be my love that we no longer care

    but have grown tired of each other
    it took us so long for us to discover one another

    it was like a place in time that we both have never seen
    the madness that have driven us to is obscene

    i cant believe
    that we

    no longer exist
    i cant resist

    if you was to call or write
    and like a fish to a hook i would byte

    because my heart still aches for you
    because my soul still needs for you
    because my body still longs to touch you
    because my mind cant stop thinking of you

    what will it take just to get us back on course
    baby i think we both feel remorse

    and want to hold on to what we have
    baby my provocative thoughts are running loose on our unforgettable bath

    as we used to bathes each other in our prescence
    and you soaking up my esscence

    boy lets stop the madness fall deeply in love with me
    i cant and wont let this be
    we

    must quit before its a shoulda
    woulda
    coulda

    no maybe or no possibilites
    not trying to spread no hyprocisy

    just need for this line of communication to be open
    i give my heart, soul and time as a token

    of once we had again
    i want to still be your lover and friend
    but all of this would have to depend
    if our

    Communication Line is Broken Again!!!!!!!!!!!
    :smooch:

    Come Home my Love the door is open............
     
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    Broken like glass
    don't know if i can last
    the communication gone
    feeling all alone
    nothing bonded strong
    seem like it's broken
    i've use every token
    this communication
    got me smoken
    baby i ain't joken
    the line down
    i don't hear a sound
    but i'll keep trying
    won't leave town
    to get the communication line
    back again from deep within.

    Thankz a million for the love and flow wow !!!!! NEVAR
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You truly are a romantic Brother $$RICH$$........once she figures it out, she'll definately dial your heart.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was feelin yo flo
    i guess da line did break again and again...lol naw jp
    but flo on my bratha



    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just maybe spicybrown just maybe
    but when the line break down theirs
    no way to even feel it ........Thankz sis.

    GhettoAmbition it's broken bad ya know
    but i have the clue to fix it ....thankz sis.
     
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    i come back a see you still killin' the thread with your pen. nice drop

    Lyr1c
     
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    thankz trying to stay in the poetry game
     
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