Black Poetry : Commentary: The Difference

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FloeticFire, Nov 11, 2003.

  1. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    The difference between a man and a stud is this
    Now play close attention
    Because what I fail to mention
    is this difference is complicated
    sometime highly underestimated
    Few can go there
    and remain the same
    Oh and let me clarify I aint one to claim
    See Im a 5'8 stallion
    FEMALE, FEMININE, Southern belle
    Intoxicating femme
    But back to my point at hand

    A man is one who puts his weight on his shoulders
    Worrying day to day is it his chance to run for the border
    A stud is one who carries her weight and so much more
    Trying to fight society...
    her questioning what she was born for
    A man often times is very simple at heart
    Yet he complicates his paths
    with deceit and lust
    Studs play games called icandi
    Professin to be the best since
    Gay Pride back in '88
    A man can talk about how he can put it on ya
    make you drift asleep and stuff
    One knee in the bed
    No this mother shame didnt come just yet
    Studs strap it on, (look **** good, but you cant admit it)
    Her hips get tired
    Before you could even get in-to it
    And you make the excuse she just PMsing it

    I guess when you look at these examples
    I have tried to give today
    Really the difference is subtle
    One is born into an gene pool
    of trapped sincerities
    false fascades
    One is given golden opportunities
    To become what they want

    Now you tell you whats the difference
    between a stud and a man except one
    can carry his genitals in hand
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh nice flow
    defining the meaning
    in feeling
    very deep indeed
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL

    TYTE FLOW...
     
  4. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    silly girl you poetically speakin ...smile those who laugh know the difference.

    Thanks Blue...its from the heart
     
  5. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow im really feeling this peace
     
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