Black Poetry : Coming

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 30, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come to me
    Come to you
    Come to do what we do
    Come the words
    Come the flow
    Come the touch
    Come the glow
    Come the desire
    Come the rhythm
    Come the fire
    Come the rush
    Come the storm
    Come the calm
    Come the rest
    Come this love
    Which is the best

    BE
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REALLY,REALLY,REALLY GOOD!

    I LIKE THAT VERY MUCH, YOU PUT JUST THE RIGHT TOUCH.
    THE SHORT STANZA'S THE RYTHMIC FLOW, LIKE A HEARTBEAT!
    SO SWEET AND SENSUOUS AT THE SAME TIME! LOVE mslb:D
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coming....

    a beautiful thing....

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    down
    from
    round
    town
    ya
    flow
    like
    i
    know
    hit
    us
    wit
    mo !!

    the beat is one touch of love ahead go str8 forward:D
     
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