Black Poetry : Coming To The Stage

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey y'all....i come to you with another work....this one is from another series me n a friend are writing.....this actually the 5th poem in the series...enjoy

    Me - Trials and tribulations lead to 2nd thoughts and contemplations
    About us people saying we should give it up
    Friends calling our relationship a temporary thing
    Saying that we'll fall when success calls us to the finer things
    making me question wether she'll stay or leave
    Or if she's using me i wanna believe
    That she's down and shes here for me
    Secondly you got critics out here talking ****
    Uncle sam the man got a plan to keep us down
    Never let a ***** on the radio call us a mere sideshow
    A disgrace to music calling our sound utter bull****
    Motivation down our relationship not on solid ground
    Look in our circle and nobody is around
    Mentals broken down tired of trying and crying
    Maybe i'm bull****ing myself maybe i'm lying
    To us both these the exact words i said
    Let the struggle and the critics get to my head
    I pronunced us dead untill you said
    Baby you can't quit
    I know the road is hard but i havent given up on it
    I feel your pain i question myself at times rather its worth the trouble
    But the assassian of my heart passion gets me through
    If your heart and soul are true you'll understand what i'm saying to you
    I know you love me and i love you too you just have to push through
    And with those words i knew what i had to do
    I wiped the tears picked up the mic
    And made love to you in the same night
    The love flows through my veins again
    Passion revived as i prepare to run inside the lions den
    Armed with the Mic and pen with intent of re-writing history
    With my lady at my side nobody can stop me
    The movement spreads the masses eat it up mouths to be fed
    No longer denied sam-i-am gives me a chance to introduce myself
    To the world and to my fans finally here i am
    The start of a new chapter for you and me time to turn the Page
    Hip-hop and the Mc are coming to the stage



    Aaron - Hardbody soul built from mental syndication
    Venomous stipulations snakes in the qrass are beautiful
    The lawnmower is an open discussion of percussions
    We tryna find a way throuqh this qlass maze blindfolded
    Lifes a qamble, and apparently we 're qambit, we 're not foldin
    No matter how close minded we contribute to this music, we 're still open
    Uncle Sam was a transvestite dike who disliked blacks on mics
    So its more or less like to be liked or even riqht
    We write, i mean really we write,. how do you fiqure wronq
    Treble clef breath encompassed in the compass of somethin off
    Try to find who you are, yet the second tenor was a senior sinner
    We been doin this since hiqh school, cloud nine band qeek tenors
    Remember we were in band camp playin hand stamps ?
    You know, tryna address issues with those swift motions of power
    We were kids. . . nothin more than kids with qoals
    We were paranoid as we wanted to be but we had soul
    Until someone sold those soles from the solid foundation we hold
    So it s not as if we walkin on this marble floor of heaven alone
    We had the rock kids, emo & a few scene qenerals
    And we were new people, we imitated minstrels
    Medicated central, we was hiqh ohff those prescriptions
    But we are here now, we must not feel no different
     
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    Da stage is set......this was in depth well felt .....wow !!!!
     
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    This is a stage play I'd love to sit through, I was capitaved to it's intirity ...great piece of work poet/s ...thanks for sharing it.
     
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    Thank you

    This actually tells of hip-hop n the Mc's arrival at superstardom

    I'll post the rest of the poems we've made later
     
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