Quiet Poetry Lounge : Coming to Terms...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 20, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming to these terms
    These terms of adoration
    Lovely, lighthearted asides
    Like billowy clouds of elation

    Honey...
    Syrupy delighting
    Darling...
    Formally inviting
    Dear...
    Gentleness I love to hear
    Baby...
    Comfort that draws me near
    Sweetheart...
    Chocolate laden confection
    Sugar...
    Granulated candied affection

    Such words, whispered in the wind
    Fashioning a ribbon around our connection
    These tender terms of endearment
    Softly blown in my direction
     
  2. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Sister Watz, I felt like I was floating on a billowy cloud with this peaceful flow!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    geepers...don't catch a cavitiey with all that sweetness blowing in the air
    :thinking:
    But then again...who would want it any other way?
    I feel this vibe, for real! beautiful piece poet
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname?!?!

    watz in a mate's name? sugar lump, nana muffin, sweet cakes, honey hideout, goo-goo ga-ga, tasty lady, good and nasty, bad gurl, daddy's girl, mizz thickness, deeper diver, black beauty, cushion pushin', love machine, vroom vroom (had to catch a breath) dirty devil, white laced, quicker licker upper, curvy cutie, buried booty treasure, tooty fruity, ya ya ya... good write watz, short and sweet.
     
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    Sister Watz!!! You had Rhythm Flowing Words Like WHoa!!!!
    The Flow was right... Keep on Sis
    Do Your Thing!:)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you found the peace in this godsmantru, thank you.
    But what a good reason to get a cavity, huh queent? lol Thank you sister.
    Look at all of that in a mate's name Brother Sha'iyn, talk about terms of endearment. Thank you, loved that response.
    You liked the rhythm Platinum? Thank you for that poetess.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'my i mean woooweee wait just come here sweet lady shoots!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL@ you Rich. Glad you enjoyed, thank you much.
     
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    MenNefer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A loved ones Tone with Terms of Endearment

    It is either that deep vibrato (*for* women) or Dulcet tone (*for* men);
    coupled with those penetrating phrases that keep that fire blazing. :10900:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true, Brother MenNefer. These lovely terms of endearment, coupled with a man's voice...whew. Much appreciated.
     
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