Quiet Poetry Lounge : Coming Out The Wilderness

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Jan 30, 2010.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    She, who roams the hills and forests of Peho-halov
    The Land of Peace, Hope, Hate, and Love
    Chased by Four Horsemen Of Life who ride to find her

    She, afraid and unsure which is which
    As each day dawns a new sun
    A constant battle of 3 against 1

    But the odds are numerically deceptive
    Hate is a mighty opponent who seeks to hold her captive
    Locked and chained in anger, envy, and spite
    The darkness of inner death blocking out the Light

    She, alone and hiding to escape the clutches of Evil
    Crouches terrified
    Not knowing that the others have already verified
    The cleansing of her soul
    But she’s weary. The constant fright takes it toll….

    Yet she sneaks and creeps on
    Skulking from one temporary shelter to the next
    Still unaware that The Supreme One has written
    Her name in His eternal “Your Redeemer Liveth” text
    Of Forgiveness and Mercy
    And that it was He
    Who sent
    The Holy Three
    The Consecrated Trinity
    To find her

    So that she could be complete
    And defeat
    The dark nemesis snapping at her heels
    And, finally, The Heavenly Triad reveals
    That she’s been blessed and, now, can take her rest.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this had me all the way i love the way you created the image in my mind, tyte scribe
     
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    CILondon Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin this one back
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was like story i really enjoyed reading you...
     
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