Black Poetry : Coming Of Age

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MoDoe, Jul 17, 2006.

  1. MoDoe

    MoDoe Member MEMBER

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    sippin on something at work and had to put this piece i wrote

    I cant see
    Seems to be a relapse betweeen a win and loss
    yet I am in the senile middle
    losing my mind like the fatherless seed I be
    unable to utilize all this manhood under my hoody so I cover my eyes...
    the sting of the pasts' past things have delegate me kurupted
    bugged 4 the future and jaded today
    raised hair on my arms encourage my nerves to move
    -and so i do-
    ripping away scabs and scars for beautiful brown growth
    -OH how i love thee-
    though warn, never brokin nor hopeless
    this boy does breathe freshness once every new harvest
    and taste the sweet of rain...
    the new beginning
    the comming of age
     
  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Mondoe....yea, bro....the taste of sweet rain....and sweet beginings...
    makes me wanna know more about the man under the hoodie

    welcome!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte write ..........flow head
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MoDoe:
    Nice drop. Flo on poet.
     
  5. MoDoe

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    thank ya'll 4 the replies
     
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    Hi MoDoe ..A very warm welcome to you, enjoy your stay and keep the flows comming..wonderful piece poet.
     
  7. MoDoe

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    thank you lady
     
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