Black Poetry : comfortable

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NicoleM, Feb 26, 2003.

  1. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My head on your chest
    Seems absolutely appropriate
    I can’t believe how free of stress
    When I am with
    Barely know
    you
    But I want to
    Would like to
    Be one of two
    Who sing the same tune
    And occupy the same room
    Minister to
    One another
    Like more than a sister and brother
    Lovers
    Above and beneath the covers
    Trembling school dazed crush
    Excited rush
    Turning me into mush
    Like how you whispered hush
    When you made me moan
    Right after you found a home
    In my heart
    Where you must have planted a seed
    Filled a need
    From the start


    2003 Nicole Mitchell



    :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin music of sweet hush
    in da arm of cares where
    two hearts rapid beat

    I love how u pose this beautiful flow ......keep da ink flowin'
     
  3. lil'MizzUnique

    lil'MizzUnique Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin ya words.. very very nice
     
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    Hard not to feel this comfortable flow!
    Oh so very nice!
     
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    Firstly welcome to Destees.

    Secondly, I loved your piece.
    I read it twice and it flows perfectly, even when said aloud.
    Keep scribin gurl.

    *Emma*
     
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    ....just as long as he marries you, l'm comfortable....

    this one's tyte...
     
  7. NicoleM

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    thank you
     
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