Black Poetry : Comfort Zone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Aug 26, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i know it's hard to make a move
    when you comfortable

    for making a shift requires you
    to be uncomfortable and willingly
    doing so isn't durable so you
    continuely dodge bullets to avoid
    change

    like O.J Simpson at a driving range
    when the world around you is still
    the same down right consciously
    mentally insane

    the pain presently surrounds the
    whole entire plain and all you do
    is sit and complain

    whine and cry calling out his name
    have all your efforts been in vain
    if the truth bares through however
    will you gain

    cleansing your soul of its dirty
    shame from the paths we choose
    terribly hard to make a move

    when the situation is highly avoidable
    and lounging around is far much
    more enjoyable and comfortable


    the comfort zone



    apt copyright 2001
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    may i ask...

    how can you bare to remain in your comfort zone
    when all of this is going on


    pd
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right...i'm feelin' ya on that. i'm lovin' the way this piece flows, fo sho, poetess. yes, i see the message, pd. keep bringin' it to us just like that, because it's tyght!


    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    lister,

    you show me so much love :heart:

    thank you girl :)

    pd
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    repost

    by general request

    pd
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    we just have to hold our breath and jump into the deep end of the pool of life....
    I like the message in this one pd....

    K
     
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