Black Haiku : Comfort Zone: ErAdIcAtIoN

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  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A comfort zone that
    can bring discomfort around
    insecurity

    The security
    protecting the comfort is
    a tough flexed mission

    Blocks the barracade
    of an unwanted subject;
    ErAdIcAtIoN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Maze within zoning
    comforting in a deep freeze
    cold tasty feeling
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the coldness felt to
    feel the deep warmness conquer
    all that is harmful
     
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    Under every turn
    sit hope from the deep coldness
    what seem harmful,not
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Great write...I love the 5-7-5 X 3 formula you used..very inventive...ive been trying that myself...great write, Poet.
     
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