Black Poetry : Come

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FattnBeautiful, Dec 22, 2007.

  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come sit with me
    Come sit with me in the candlelight
    Lets share our fears,our dream,
    our wildest fantasies
    Come sit with me as we gaze in each others eyes
    with our fingers intertwine
    Come lye with me
    Come lye with me with your body on top of mine
    as our bodies twist and wind
    not knowing who begins and who ends
    Come with me
    Come with me as we ride the waves sensations
    getting drown in our pleasures
    Come climb with me
    Come climb with me as we reach the highest peak
    looking in each others eyes as our bodies fall and rise
    Come listen with me
    Come listen with me as our hearts race in our chests
    trying to calm down
    Come close your eyes with me
    Come close your eyes with me as you hold me in your arms
    as we fall asleep
     
  2. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come, let me hold your hand
    Let me hold you hand and have a conversation
    Talking about this and that as the time passes
    Come let me hold you in my arms
    Holding you as we dance to smooth sounds
    and a lovers rhythm
    Come, let me kiss you passionately
    As one thing leads to another, and that leads to another still
    Come, and be ... be with me



    Nice write Beautiful​
     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come look at me
    Look at me as we gaze into each other's eyes
    Come laugh with me
    Laugh with me as we share our lows and highs
    Come dance with me
    Dance with me as we slowly cast our cares away
    Come touch me
    Touch me as we romance the night away
    Come be with me
    Be with me and make my world disappear
    Come take me
    Take me to places I've never seen my dear
    Come love me
    Love me like you'll never see me again
    Come give me
    Give me all of you, through and through, until there's nothing left to give

    Excellent flow Ms Beautiful...Excellent flow!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite an alluring write poetess. And very nice flows from gralicsalt and HopelisRomantic as well.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    come wit me
    come wit me to this place unknown
    as we dance in the radiant glow
    come share wit me
    the foreverness spool in the spinner
    where only two hearts beat as one
    come wit me
    come wit me to the wonder winter lands
    where love is capture in grand style
    come join me
    on this journey of joy
    inside the chambers of soul lace
    come wit me
    come !
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    wow with all that going on

    all you could do was sleep afterwards

    lol

    naw

    feeling the love in this here poet

    peace