Black Poetry : Come...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (verse)
    In the lord i am compleet...
    happy...
    but somthimes i run short in my humanity...
    by my quiet desire for you..
    wich only He can soften..
    and you can ease...




    (bridge)
    where are you my love...
    i,ve wondered where you are..

    where are you my love
    longing for youre touch....




    (chorus)
    Come and share the Love...
    we will be beautifull...
    You live inside my heart...
    we will be as One ......love...


    It was a long time ago...
    a story in my heart that was told..
    of what would become..
    a man in my life..
    for i was not placed here alone..
    being alone is just vanity..
    as the bibel speaks...



    where are you my love ..
    I,ve wondered where you are...
    where are you my love...
    i,m longing here to hold you.... Ohhhh





    (bridge)

    we who stood before others..
    with tears in our eyes....

    just because..
    just because....
    maybe for the growth..

    we may never know....

    we who gave for love is giving..
    we may never know..
    if we dont go...

    for love....

    we may never know...


    (chorus)

    Come and share the Love...
    we will be beautifull...

    you live in inside my heart..
    we will be strong love....
    love....






    come and share this love.. .ohh....
    we will be beautifull...
    you live inside my heart..

    we will be as One love...





    ohh ...





    I call out to Him............



    he who speaks in to youre heart...
    he who speaks in youre heart....



    ohh......




    our time will come..




    come...




    come..
     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You seem to have it down right. A relationship with God is a big step in Him sending you a mate. This was a joy to read. I know good things lie ahead for you.
     
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    Prayer is a whisper of a SCREAM

    God Bless!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely thy love within is it is in he
    god love ya and the man to lay in comfort
    and he so will send you thy loveth ..........
     
  5. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice poem, im feelin it, and i believe u did a good job with it
    holla back
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It can be difficult to wait on the Lord to send us our mate, but I think with faith it can happen. Touching piece.
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what an beautiful piece enjoyed the flow of this!!!!!!:welldone: :hi:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord is definetly
    Something to sing about
    Much Love Sista
     
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    Sista Auroraflower, you be doin ya thang..
    Truly you are talented... Nice piece....