Black Poetry : Come...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Apr 13, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come...
    drape your arm
    around my shoulder
    lets together
    step into the future
    transform our past
    from a verb to a noun
    making it a thing
    we left behind

    come…
    lets link fingers
    and walk into an eternal world
    no storms will conquer
    if your sun doesn’t shine
    I’ll share glow from mine
    if the heat scorches our face
    love will be our shade
    proving that its
    more than just a cliché





    ©2003amberly
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love your poem it touches me like right HERE, you put feelins in words betta than any1 i know that's why i think you are a great poet.

    transform our past
    from a verb to a noun :) :) :)

    keep flowin you know i will
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIKE THAT

    Come, come, and then some
    Hear, hear, and I'm there-

    1poetsought ~ :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in flyte unto u
    this walked right into me
    now i hold it in grasp
    flow on !