Black Poetry : Come with me Now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't look at my form.
    Baby and think that I am weak.
    For he can never speak to you the way I will.

    Don't look at my form, and think that I am weak.
    For he will never treat you good like I will.

    If I got myself together.
    You had passed on this endeavor.
    To be with me forever.
    It's on you.

    Though I will share now how I feel.
    If you should later.
    Come back.
    Here’s the deal.

    You have to change.
    How you view true love.

    See it comes wrapped in all shapes and sizes.
    Small and tall about to die there are surprises.

    See true love sneaks in when it wants.
    So don't look at me today, and turn my advances away.
    For tomorrow I'll be your desire.

    It's the soul of a man; he can change things about himself any time.
    But true love only comes to him.
    In waves.

    I just hope you get with me.
    Before it is to late you see.
    Because I can’t hold.
    My love just for thee.
    It has to be free.

    Another comes along.
    If she hears my voice and song.
    Then it is your loss.
    Like you are to me now.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words that vomit from the soul, is pure and natural...
    wonderful drop poet...love finds it's way, in time.
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE.......

    Hodee...........*blushes*..........do you know what you do, when you do what you do?!?! Calgon.......:flirt:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man .....u took it there and back wit this one ...tyte!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa... Yes love cannot wait forever and a day until the other decides to come around. This was on point.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was right on time Hodee. keep up the good flo's my brotha.:spinstar:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SO TRUE POET, WONDERFUL WRITE:love: :love: :love: :love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was true to life
    More people need this vision
    Much Love on this poet