Black Poetry : Come With Heat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Apr 30, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come With heat

    Write true scripture plus drew a picture with words
    Quite possible to write Gospel and use all holy verbs
    My type nouns are like sounds they awaken folks with
    Baking quotes many be taking notes on this amazing gift
    Came to party in order an like a main body of water run
    Along the coats with strong posts on every site for fun
    Have a mild voice and like a wild horse make leaps and
    Bounds across meadows throught towns and ghettos plan
    To stay ill, like frowns I cause facial expressions through
    Graceful aggression, wrinkle foreheads and sprinkle true
    Bread in my style for flavor smile major tinkle with my crew
    Like a storm I’ve grounded ships with renown scripts sunk boats
    With stunts and smoke cats try panic like the Titanic junk float
    And hit icebergs so in nice words this stuff is ill no flim flam
    Oppose fools chose to stay in school must pass exams
    Task is to slamdunk punks with education here I am
    Ride the bus man at home discuss plans on buying a car
    Trying for a bazaare hoopty with somne D’S on it so far
    Hasn’t found one around town done some searching like air-
    Planes in New York I’m flying low tryin to flow with affairs
    On microphones, while hairs on my dome slick with grease
    Saw a house destroyed by fire it toyed with my desire to relase
    Cash on a new crib my crew live in a hut, but we happy feast
    On KFC chicken licking our fingers plumb sick of drumsticks
    End up with bold raw cole slaw and biscuits wow! I’m done quick
    With lunch nowadays,
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop rhymebad

    Dropping Heat:terrific:
    I see ya brother
    Setting the flow and beat on the streets.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ya on fire love the flip of this joint
     
  4. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fire..i like your writing style son..it can be jumbled a times but I guess thats what seperates and defines you from the rest...
    why you never comment on other peoples flows though? I noticed that about u...its whatever but I was just wondering...

    another thing, do you rap too? like make tracks and stuff..??
    Id like to hear how you would put this together vocally...

    uno
     
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