Black Poetry : Come walk wit me / ssee what is seen

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As we visit life of living , come walk down the heart land of A-meri-can
    trails of tears human fears jobless soul look as we stroll
    in struggling mist of oppression of darken dreary days
    of an nation weary staggering upon da white whims
    fourty million lives , (land cross the land)
    with dreams of the brave and freedom stand yet the horror
    of a nation a playstation da lost hope and death from starvation
    exile of the cries i loom to love indeeds paper chase spirits
    as we walk inside the unborn life wanting to live.

    screams in silent motherly unto the great GOD
    in plea of thy child manifest destiny of down fallin society
    corrupted dismay wasteland of rottin debris,polluted crypts
    stolen niles as we walk on the street of cities through fields
    of nowhere and past memory killing thunderous hopes
    whereas moments and darken days a great void spools
    a history a story lay un-sealed with wondrous life
    embracing the mission of distance attacks shoesless
    mother walks and battered and torn by what's seen
    da hunger arise wintery blast icy cold homeless
    father none job to feed da wedd of his soul
    don't make me die on da steps of hurt n' pain
    come walk with me inside the garden of destruction
    where man at will strips the hopes of another man

    I fight by faith my spirit carries within it's own
    yet da creed like in a pal of one place of fracture dismay
    taste the sour fruits growing from the earth of mirit soil
    numb brains as i try to keep my sanity
    the watery waves pushing while whispering air calling
    the congo drums beating tap rain dance of thy home
    struggling maze of life where we failed and came short
    of this unity to unite to fill da void left behind
    controller speaks it's evil Heavens cry in trillions of tears
    making earth wet and icy balls of anger as earth feel da pain

    heavens leak small white flakes against da worlds hate
    making earth go insane until it won't melt til we return
    to da motherlands
    the wails of my heart has become
    a storm a rage a reflection of what has been seen
    my life pitted me with da greed upon souls & spirits
    vow my depth to GOD and impower his grace to withstand
    this american place and live the universe path of falsely accused
    the misery become miserable ,hostile and deeper depressional
    state of mind as da weaken mental become there slayer
    we shall ova come someday !
    Da system.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop Rich!

    In light of recent events from Haiti to Teddy P and all those whose life has been affected by tragedy the likes to which some will never experience and will never know or see, you have penned a masterpeace! **** System...
     
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    so true , maybe oneday somehow somewhere the light will shine and a rainbow will glo
    thank u for the visit
     
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    love the flow.....
     
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    Thank you , i was just mentally walking through the maze of life before me and this what i saw
     
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    I read this one when i was in the hosptial and didnt know how to use my phone to reply....lol still learning no kids to help me out with it last night.

    this was just an awesome write...it goes deep your pen indeed do a mental walk i love this flow.
     
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    Thank you sister MzBlkAngel2
     
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    Come walk wit me down life highway and city streets !
     
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