Black Poetry : Come True

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

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    Come True

    Have bad ears but adheres to my ideas even when proved wrong
    Groove along like nothing happened still rapping very strong
    Have class and powers and like a mass of flowers blooms in
    The background then smack a clown with a paint brush to win
    A art battle then depart saddled a horse like the Lone Ranger
    Face strong danger, slap other cowboys somehow destroys the anger
    In their trigger fingers don’t make me have to shoot you don’t draw
    My rhyme fry quick like dry sticks for campfires this stuff all raw //
    Fear fools because they don’t adhere to rules but my rhymes are
    Tall vapor stuck up like wallpaper, life is a nickel and dime bazaar
    Got facts and smart so I act the part of a professor in charge
    At home got a dresser large filled with books just can’t dodge
    Knowledge, bloom in America and assume the character of Einstein
    With atomic rhymes my Ebonics climb trees in Hiroshima sometimes
    My crew is alert and ready to do work on microphones key style and
    See wild crowds clap their hand my raps share land like Real Estate stand
    For home buying in my chrome trying to look good with waves in my hair
    Behave as a player but crave for a layer of love from a chick need a pair
    Of tonguing kisses while humming doing the dishes itching in the kitchen
    Got a love map in my hand tried to adapt a plan to grab booty that be twitching
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still droppin tyte vibes love this one
     
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    For real rhymebad
     
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    Come True


    There is nothing else
    True is how to come
    Address the matter with mind
    Cracking chains like pouring wet
    Dropping the bass beat rhyme at the feet

    Come True

    I like how you structured this flow
    Has all of raw character style and flow
    Great drop.. keep flowing
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks fo rthe props on this one for real yall tried to come true
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep
    flow for the love of what you do.
    Nothing else matters.
     
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    To thine own self poet, to thine own self be true, keep them rolling.
     
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