Quiet Poetry Lounge : Come to my window

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Jan 11, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I dreamed you came
    to me as a breeze
    through my window
    Softly blowing, lightly caressing
    Sending waves of desire against
    The sheet that lay between us
    The paper-thin cotton fortress
    That separated me from you
    The barrier that held me captive
    Kissing my peaks
    Leveling my valleys
    Hollowing my planes
    Radiating your virility
    Subliminally conveying truths
    Of rites of passages and
    Certainties of seduction
    As you changed from breeze
    To gusting wind... your forcefulness
    Caused the sheet to slip from my body
    I feel you embody me
    Your spirit enthralls me
    Now you are at all out gale
    I can feel you changing my seasons
    Our seasons
    From the summer of deprivation
    To the autumn of awareness
    To the winter of revelelation
    Finally arriving at the
    Spring of orgasmic combustion
    I whisper thanks to you...
    and that I was born in the April
    How fitting to be reborn in the spring
    Thank you for coming
    Thank you for overwhelming me

    Carrying my smiles
    Leaving me sated
    You slip back through my window
    As quietly and softly as you came
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa Sister
    That was powerful
    As you slip back in as ya left
    Man this is red hott sis
    Keep doing your thang sweetie
    Im loving this
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Charmed I am Brotha Tan...

    Especially coming from
    The Last of His Kind...
    I'ma try to make it hotter next time....
    Taking suggestions... lol...
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was right on time my sister. i truly enjoyed this piece as if it was my cappucino good to the last drop. flow on my sista!!!!!!!! i love you!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    Do ya thang sis... This was really hot....
    Keep it coming sis.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da breeze of warmth has come
    this was a awesome flow i could
    dance all in it ........wow !!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    That very breeze u felt
    was the warmth of me
    caressin ya tender soul
    cascading through ya sheets
    touchin u soft & meek
    i'm like a thousand windz
    the kiss upon ya lip
    the breeze between ya hips
    i'm the gentle comfort
    that held u down
    felt u in a radiant glow
    i was the windz of love
    can u feel me now
    i'll return tonight
    to watch u sleep in
    my breezing passion
    it was i my beloveth !
    as i watch u come softly
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.
    this is tight
     
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