Black Poetry : COME TO ME...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Beautiful_by_me, Jul 8, 2004.

  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come to me


    Once again pages from another forces me to write down my anticipation of the...
    'what's next',
    and once again I answer...
    Yes to all that you have to offer,
    even your eagerness to experience the strange of another’s hand upon your body...
    touching you a-new...
    cautiously feeling my way around you until I'm no longer afraid....
    touching you until I'm familiar with
    you,
    even those places of you...that are unfamiliar to you
    will began to call out to me...
    waking you in your state of mind...
    writing my name, my picture, my words across your memory,
    until you appease your wants and desires, and come to me...
    Would you dare…come to me????
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful_by_me nice post for real but let me drop a punchline up in here fro real

    Some cats are bazaar fools like a carpools it’s your time
    The drive too blind to survive, can’t score with rhyme
    Pour lime in your brain now you sore with pain
     
  3. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ????RHYMES????
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i'll come
    coz i'm da compassionate one
    yes i dare , and shall rise
    to ya humble touch suprise
    as u feel ya way
    mind & soul into a journey
    to be unfold
    da warmth of handz
    finger touch
    once u enter ya heart
    to be clutched
    do u dare open to invite?
    do u dare?

    very nice flow had to mix in it .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If he reads this, he will come to you....Inviting write.
     
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    You laid the cards out on the table. He was come. Sweet scribe
     
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    Oh...wow

    I love what you've done here...

    Every part of this perfectly captured the exploration of passion...

    and the willingness to supply...that which is in need or requested

    by that one...to which you'd capture the moon for...


    Oh my....I love it! :jumping: