Black Poetry : Come talk to me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by insol33, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. insol33

    insol33 Member MEMBER

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    Lonely, yearning for the second to hear your voice I wrote this
    Ummm excuse me, miss…

    Can a get a second, minute, hour?
    Yours and mine -- a bit of your time
    Just to tell you a little somethin’
    You already knew

    Can you feel me? As I reach out to you…
    With a whisper of things that we used to do
    Tell me somethin’…
    Just a minute; you tell me when

    Come closer, come near
    The things we used to share
    I got wat you need…
    Hooked like weed
    You know wat I’m sayn… not playn
    You know how it is with me
    You think you could find a minute free,
    To come chill with me?

    Come on girl, give me wat I need
    You just want to see me plead
    But I want what I want and its like this
    Umm... umm... excuse me miss
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing wrong wit asking what u want i feel u here
    keep speaking asking and one so will giveth it .....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep asking, the right one will answer and won't keep you waiting. Feeling this vibe, flow on.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing likes the vibe...
     
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