Black Poetry : Come Si Chiama

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 13, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I ask cause you are what
    God meant when he said
    let there BE a real "wombman"
    fifth rib descendent and
    innocent / and in your scent of
    Vanilla and Jasmine I envision
    me drifting so,

    Come Si Chiama ?

    Gloria, Erykah, Egypt, Star,
    Epiphany, Alexis, LaShanda,
    Sienna, Nina, Cymone, Vanessa,
    Deja, Tia, Marvelous?

    Come Si Chiama ?

    After that maybe we can walk
    and discuss the sculpting of
    who we are maybe blow kisses
    to the stars / returning to us
    wishes we pronounced when we were
    children only in an adult version
    so,

    Come Si Chiama ?

    Faye, Orion, Mya, Monique,
    Janis, Melinda, Ama'ri, Imani,
    Carmen, Charmagne, Champagne,
    Shantell?

    Come Si Chiama ?

    Begging is not my M.O
    but a closed mouth don't get fed
    and I'm hungry for info regarding
    you so,

    Come Si Chiama?

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    je m'appelle Elayne...

    (that's french... sorry to change languages on you) :)

    this piece was wonderful.

    AlwaysLove~
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um...

    this is so beautiful....I've forgotten what my name is! :)

    A
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    big smiles on this one heyah, ma brutha...yes, indeed.
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the sistahs melt!!!!

    Great piece Blakman!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U MADE ME SIT DOWN
    I LOVE IT
    I LOVE IT MAN~O~MAN!!
    SHAKING MY HEAD
     
  7. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Fifth rib descendent".....brotha, thats real...

    Yeah, definetely feel'n this vibe here....
    Flow on, flow on....