Black Poetry : Come on Man!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Apr 12, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Come on Man!

    Be Straight with Me.

    The Shock Will Feel.
    Good To Your Skin.

    If You Feel
    Something’s Wrong

    It’s the Truth
    You Just Told

    I Know

    Because I Heard
    You, with My Ears.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I loved that part about the shock feeling good!


    BRAVO to the whole!
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I do concur with Sister Cherry B
    The truth as a shock to the system is a good write :)
    props hodee bear!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    without any doubt the shock will be felt by the truth
    awesome piece of art work and creation brother Hodee
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The truth is a shock to those who tend to avoid it. Another bull's eye from you brother poet.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    deep deep

    :bowdown:

    a Hodee masterpiece

    some of the most powerfull stuff comes

    from less words

    i appreciate this
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanks K